16. Face to Face conversation
17. Report or Proposal
18. Letter
19. Email
20. Face to Face conversation
21. Video or Teleconference
22. Face to Face group meeting
23. Our safety policy forbids you from renting power equipment that has not been trained on the appropriate equipment.
24. To prevent you from possibly losing large sums of money in stolen identity schemes, you will now have to show some identification for any large checks presented for immediate payment.
25. When you complete and return this enclosed card, you can bring your records up-to-date and eliminate the expense of duplicate mailings.
26. You can have this great offer of a gateway package that includes hotel accomidations, pleasure Island tickets, and a complimentary breakfast for just $139 per person.
27. When you fill out this enclosed questionnaire, you will recieve a master schedule for summer vacations.
28. If you want to earn some expierence in your writing skills, then we have an offer for an in-house training program for you.
29. To enable us to continue our policy of selling name brands at discount prices, you could recieve store credit but cannot return merchandise nor give back cash refunds.
30. You can recieve a free ipod only if you are in class which an instructor permits these devices in class.
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On number 26. It is better to simplify your response in order with better and few choice of words. "You can have this great offer of a getaway". You can change it up by saying "You can enjoy a getaway". In this it takes away 5 words that could be crucial in advertising.
ReplyDeleteI did, however, can concur with you on number 27. It is very difficult to make this an easy "You" fix, because in my opinion, the schedule is not just for the management team, but for the employees also.