Revising Sentences:
16. Comma Splice: Although they began as a side business for Disney; however, destination weddings now represent a major income source.
17. Fragment: About 2,000 weddings are held yearly, which is twice the number just ten years ago.
18. Comma Splice: Weddings may take place in less than one hour, but the cost may be as much as $5,000.
19. Comma Splice: Limousines line up outside Disney's wedding pavilion; however, the ceremonies are scheduled in two-hour intervals.
20. Run-on: Many couples prefer a traditional wedding, or others request a fantasy experience.
Emphasis21. B
22. B
23. B
24. A
25. B
26. A
27. A
28. B
29. B
30. A
Active-Voice Verbs31. Bill used the company credit card to purchase office supplies.
32. Congress passed laws in many states to protect students that prohibit the use of social security numbers as identification.
33. Bank tellers processed checks more quickly because of new regulation.
34. FedEx scans millions of packages every night as the packages stream through its Memphis hub.
Passive-Voice Verbs35. There were many errors in this report.
36. Your order will not be shipped til later.
37. There was a warning regarding the use of pesticide.
38. Insurance does not cover damage to rental cars.
39. No insurance, no care.
Parellelism40. To improve your listening skills, you should stop talking, control your surroundings, listen for main points, and have an open mind.
41. Paula day will now supervise the Eastern Division operations of Okefenokee branch, and Reggie Kositz will supervise the Western Division for the Oroville branch.
42. The new employee has used the computers and has learned the coworkers names.
43. Training seminars are challenging and stimulating.
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45. We need more staff members, office space, and budget for overtime is small.
Sentence Unity48. To win the lottery, you must purchase a ticket.
49. The reason why our boss is such a good manager is that he genuinely listens to employees.